tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658678959849889671.post7647170393710723619..comments2010-05-08T14:32:42.122-05:00Comments on Jessica Eaton's EDM 310 Class Blog: Blog Assignment Week 15Jessica Eatonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01316637269147640480noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658678959849889671.post-58008768994147397312010-04-22T10:05:52.440-05:002010-04-22T10:05:52.440-05:00My sentence is definitely a work in progress, but ...My sentence is definitely a work in progress, but hopefully it will sound something like this: "She developed research in the field of gifted education and helped to acquire more federal funding for the field." <br />I sincerely hope it's something to that effect.Jessica Eatonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01316637269147640480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658678959849889671.post-81506880692646203972010-04-21T16:24:19.672-05:002010-04-21T16:24:19.672-05:00How about a temporary sentence? Or a sentence as a...How about a temporary sentence? Or a sentence as a "work in progress"?<br /><br />Compare what you have written (in your post above) with the 7th graders post. You need to improve yours!John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.com